“ I stared at the deep-voiced boy,
taken aback, but he was looking away toward the dark forest behind us. He'd
said that the Cullen’s didn't come here, but his tone had implied something
more—that they weren't allowed; they were prohibited. His manner left a strange
impression on me, and I tried to ignore it without success.” Bella swans mind tends to confuse me. If I
was her I would stay away from the Cullen’s. They seem dangerous and not very
friendly. I m mean if she really thought
that they weren’t allowed there why would she go towards him? He would have to have a reason to not be there. But I
guess mystery is what is she finds attractive. I mean if she really finds a man
that sparkles that would be a miracle.
“As I trudged through that forest following
him, I started to think of the worst. But then he stopped. Dead stop in the
middle of the forest. Started to unbutton his shirt. I should’ve looked away
but something kept pulling me back in. His skin shinning in the sunlight ,
almost looking like diamond.” If I saw a man unbuttoning his shirt in front of
me , I would look away. But no she just stands ; awkwardly stares at his skin.
That evidently looks like diamonds. That is probably the weirdest thing I have
ever heard anyone say. What about playing
baseball in a thunder storm, that is a smart man you got there.
“ We walked out into the deserted
piece of land. The Cullen’s were already there. Bat in hand and Ball in the
other hand. Me and Edward walked. He walked right up to first place telling me
to stay where I was. Gripping the bat , Emmet standing about five feet
away. Serves up the ball. Emmet threw
that ball so hard it would have been impossible for a human to hit that ball.
But for a vampire I guess it was easy.” If I had to choose a vampire that
played baseball good or a normal guy who is really bad. I would pick the normal
guy, but Bella isn’t a very smart girl. I’m pretty sure we already covered that
though. Just because he’s gorgeous doesn’t mean you have to do anything stupid
for him.
All in all , I think that Bella is
probably the craziest person ever. I know that I would always go with Jacob no
matter what. I know that he would never do anything stupid , or play baseball in
a thunderstorm. That why Bella is insane; many more names. But I guess when
forced to make a choice on witch mythical creature you want to be in a relationship
with. Never ever, go with the vampire go
with the werewolf always.
That was really good, I liked how you started telling it from Bella's point of view then you went to your side of view and put what you thought about it.
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