Authors Note:
I analyzed two poems "Rainy Daze" and "Out Loud Music" Both
used figurative language to enhance their pieces. Using tone and mood to
make their poems both intriguing and interesting.
Most of the time people are no longer interested into a book after the 1st
chapter. Whether the plot is boring of
the theme isn’t their thing or the figurative language isn’t enough. That’s exactly the opposite of what happened
in both “Rainy Daze” by Cindy Rodgers, and “Out Loud Magic”. These poems both
use figurative language to enhance the tone, mood, and interests in each poem.
In both “Rainy Daze” and “Out Loud Magic”, imaginary and
figurative language used to make the text more dramatic and add desire. For instance in the quote “ Her eyes flashed
with lightning and sorrow” , it seems like the author is trying to add some
imagery to replicate the way this girl is feeling; it also builds up drama
which makes this piece interesting. Also , some metaphors and repeating strong
words were used in place of some of the
usual word choice. The repeating were
used to the advantage to the author in
“Out Loud Magic” with really emphasizing the order of the family’s actions ,
and is also mixed with personification , giving it extra significance.
In addition to adding drama, the two authors used two types
of imagery to add importance of the events that take place. Making it easy and interesting
to read. In “Rainy Daze” the imagery made the authors tone sad and discouraged
, very easy to understand. Also in the poem “Out Loud Music” the personification
made the tone seemed like they were ready to conquer anything and everything.
Making the pieces very interesting!
Also the figurative language in these pieces made the tone through
they also made me feel , as the reader, feel certain ways while reading. For example, the different personifications
from “Rainy Daze” makes me feel like If I’m having one bad day, it doesn’t mean
it’s a bad life. Just like the girl. But in “Out Loud Music “strong word choice
and personifications made it a very powerful piece, giving you the feeling that
if you have a dream , you can always conquer that dream at any time. I gained different moods from each piece.
In both, “Out Loud Music” and “Rainy Daze” figurative language
made each poem sound a lot more interesting and anything boring. Also changing the mood and tone of the
reader. So maybe, quality figurative language, instead of yawning and being
bored you can be smothered by these great poems being pressed to your face, begging
to be read.