Music Daze

Authors Note: I analyzed two poems "Rainy Daze" and "Out Loud Music" Both used figurative language to enhance their pieces. Using tone and mood to make their poems both intriguing and interesting.

Most of the time people are no longer interested  into a book after the 1^st chapter.  Whether the plot is boring of the theme isn’t their thing or the figurative language isn’t enough.  That’s exactly the opposite of what happened in both “Rainy Daze” by Cindy Rodgers, and “Out Loud Magic”. These poems both use figurative language to enhance the tone, mood, and interests in each poem.

In both “Rainy Daze” and “Out Loud Magic”, imaginary and figurative language used to make the text more dramatic and add desire.  For instance in the quote “ Her eyes flashed with lightning and sorrow” , it seems like the author is trying to add some imagery to replicate the way this girl is feeling; it also builds up drama which makes this piece interesting. Also , some metaphors and repeating strong words  were used in place of some of the usual word choice.  The repeating were used to the advantage  to the author in “Out Loud Magic” with really emphasizing the order of the family’s actions , and is also mixed with personification , giving it extra significance.

In addition to adding drama, the two authors used two types of imagery to add importance of the events that take place. Making it easy and interesting to read. In “Rainy Daze” the imagery made the authors tone sad and discouraged , very easy to understand. Also in the poem “Out Loud Music” the personification made the tone seemed like they were ready to conquer anything  and  everything. Making the pieces very interesting!

Also the figurative language in these pieces made the tone through they also made me feel , as the reader, feel certain ways while reading.  For example, the different personifications from “Rainy Daze” makes me feel like If I’m having one bad day, it doesn’t mean it’s a bad life. Just like the girl. But in “Out Loud Music “strong word choice and personifications made it a very powerful piece, giving you the feeling that if you have a dream , you can always conquer that dream at any time. I gained  different moods from each piece.

In both, “Out Loud Music” and “Rainy Daze” figurative language made each poem sound a lot more interesting and anything  boring. Also changing the mood and tone of the reader. So maybe, quality figurative language, instead of yawning and being bored you can be smothered by these great poems being pressed to your face, begging to be read.

Battlefield

Authors Note : This piece is a character analysis of Rae Momsen from "Love is a Battlefield". You will find twists and turns that cause the character to act in many different ways.  

In the book “Love is a Battlefield” by Charlene Steward . The main character Rae Momsen  is a small town girl that never believed that she could be taken by love.  She doesn’t believe in love. When taken to live with her grandparents  after her parents die, things start to change.  Her personality and attitude towards life.

She thinks that her life will somewhat be the same, but she needs to start believing in herself.  When she starts at her new school she meets a boy, his name is Rodney.  She starts to open up about her past  to him, and comes a tad bit out of her shell.  But when Rae finds out about his past. She believes that maybe they were meant to be , but is to insecure to believe her own thoughts. Being the new girl, she is getting a lot of negative attention. She’s just trying to fight against the bullies and be herself, which making her stronger.  

About half way through the book Rodney dies , It was because of a head on crash. But the worst part is that he caused it. Rae starts to think suicidal thoughts  , and that he would want her with him. Rae starts to talk to a girl named Tatiana  . They seem to have the same outlook on life.  

Rae ends up starting a club to talk about everything negative  that , is going on in their lives. Pretty much a support group, for all that are struggling.  In that group she meets another boy whose name is Froy,  He is bulimic.  But Rae is the only one that knows; She seems to make him rethink of who , really cares for him. 

Things get more serious in Froy and Raes lives , they start to date.  Rae is a lot more Open and Caring now.  They live by the rule , “If jump off a bridge you stay grounded”. It’s their life saying , they always will live by that rule . I mean what can I say? Love is a Battlefield ; sometimes you won’t always win the war.  But  Rae will always be a strong and very loving person for as long as she will live.

Sweet Goodbyes

Authors Note- This is a conflict and resolution piece on the books "My Sweet Memories" by Rebecca Muckers and the book "Run baby Run" by Tasha Trevor’s.

It’s amazing how you will have something one day and loose it the next. Rebecca Muckers – knows this all too well. She is a character from the book “My Sweet Memories “ by Ronda Rojoreson.   Rebecca know that when you are in the wrong place at the wrong time , you life can fade and even memories will change.   Rebecca was kidnapped at the age of 15, escaped at age 20. Coming back to her house she didn’t even feel safe.  She has a conflict towards herself, not even being comfortable in her own skin. This is the conflict for the book.  

One of the reasons this is a self vs. self  conflict is because she starts to make up things in her mind. Things that are bad and  not good for her to think. She thinks that there are people after her, looking for her. Because of this  she feels like she is almost living a nightmare.  Another reason is because her own parent don’t care for her. They aren’t there to comfort her when she is down in the dumps.  That is why is it a self vs. self conflict. The message you have can make a difference.

While the conflict in the book is very drastic, there is a even stronger message that goes along with the resolution. The story was resolved when the men that took her before came back for her. She escaped their grasp and stood up for herself.  What makes things neat is when  Rodney- Her old best friend that had no idea finds where she had been and takes her in. This resolves the story,  she is no longer alone.  Overall the message of the story is to “never judge someone , you don’t know what they have been through.” There are books out there that are very close to the plot of the other book.

Another book is “Run baby Run”  by Tesha Trevers . The story line is almost the same but the main character is Garret , a boy.  We all know that this book is a self vs. self conflict. He is judged by the way he walks , talks and sometimes even the way he stands. This book relates to “My Sweet Memories”  due to the fact they are judged unfairly. Don’t judge someone if you don’t know their journey in life.